• What are your most memorable pieces of writing, and why are they special to you?

    Posted by ChristianDave on March 13, 2023 at 11:11 am

    Here’s mine,
    .

    ๐‹๐ž๐ญ๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐  ๐˜๐จ๐ฎ ๐†๐จ: ๐๐š๐ฏ๐ข๐ ๐š๐ญ๐ข๐ง๐  ๐ญ๐ก๐ž ๐’๐ญ๐š๐ ๐ž๐ฌ ๐จ๐Ÿ ๐†๐ซ๐ข๐ž๐Ÿ

    ๐‚๐ก๐š๐ฉ๐ญ๐ž๐ซ ๐Ÿ“ : ๐€๐œ๐œ๐ž๐ฉ๐ญ๐š๐ง๐œ๐ž

    Once upon a time, in a land of dreams,

    A fairy lived, with silent, silent screams

    Her love, a secret she kept,

    But it forever drowned her heart.

    .

    She was there for him, through his darkest days,

    And whispered words of strength when he couldn’t believe.

    She held him close, when he wanted to let go,

    And helped him to rise when he felt so low.

    .

    Years went by, her love for him never faded.

    She stood by his side, through good and bad,

    But he never knew, her heart ached and shattered.

    As she watched him love another, it made her so sad.

    .

    One day, he loved another, a real girl young and bright,

    And he fell in love, without a fight.

    The fairy’s heart grew heavy with sorrow and grief,

    As she watched him leave, and her love, a forgotten belief.

    .

    But still she stayed, her love never wavered,

    Silently watching, her feelings never tempered.

    For deep down she knew, in her heart so true,

    That her love, can’t be bested by his new

    .

    And so, the fairy, with a heart full of love

    Watches from the shadows, as the one she loves

    Is by another’s side, with a smile so bright

    But little does the other know, that he holds her heart tight.

    .

    In secret moments, when the world is asleep

    They share whispered words, and hearts that beat

    In perfect harmony, their love is true

    But it must remain hidden, for the feelings are only for two.

    .

    And so, she watches, with a heavy heart

    As he lives his life, with another to play a part

    But deep in her soul, she knows it’s true

    That her love for him, will forever ensue.

    .

    we unveil the name,

    of the fairy who loved,

    with all her heart,

    and all her soul.

    Tinkerbell, who has always loved Peter Pan.

    .

    ๐ˆ ๐ฐ๐š๐ฌ ๐ก๐ž๐ซ,

    ๐“๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐ข๐ฌ ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ

    • This discussion was modified 1 year, 2 months ago by  ChristianDave.
    • This discussion was modified 1 year, 2 months ago by  ChristianDave.
    • This discussion was modified 1 year, 2 months ago by  ChristianDave.
    monicaval replied 9 months, 4 weeks ago 8 Members · 7 Replies
  • 7 Replies
  • matt

    Member
    March 13, 2023 at 11:24 am

    Wow that’s Wonderful, Great Work!

  • jazzteene

    Member
    March 13, 2023 at 11:25 am

    That’s a great work!

  • Ruztien

    Member
    March 13, 2023 at 11:32 am

    Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece

  • JohnHenry

    Member
    May 23, 2023 at 4:54 pm

    wow that’s wonderful

  • Anne

    Member
    July 13, 2023 at 9:30 am

    One of my most memorable pieces of writing is a personal narrative I wrote about a transformative travel experience. This piece holds a special place in my heart because it allowed me to reflect on how the journey had shaped me as an individual. Through vivid descriptions and emotional storytelling, I was able to capture the essence of that adventure, making it not only memorable for myself but also relatable to readers who have experienced similar transformative moments in their lives. Writing this piece helped me realize the power of storytelling and how it can connect people across different backgrounds, making it a truly exceptional piece of writing for me.

  • lykah

    Member
    July 13, 2023 at 9:32 am

    great piece

  • monicaval

    Member
    July 17, 2023 at 2:18 pm

    ang galing, your piece makes me imagine like I’m watching it. I felt sad for tinker bell.

    • This reply was modified 9 months, 4 weeks ago by  monicaval.

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